Wednesday, 27 August 2014

Marshmallow Bare Bones

WALT: Create a bare bones plan

  1. Boy at campfire cooking marshmallows
  2. Something creeps up behind him
  3. Boy's blanket catches fire from a spark
  4. Boy realizes there is a monster
  5. Boy throws blanket at monster
  6. Grass catch on fire
  7. Both jump into water
  8. Dad comes and puts the fire out
  9. Boy tells Dad about the monster
  10. Dad hits monster
  11. Monster is boy's big brother
  12. All have marshmallows together

3 comments:

  1. Hi Yotam,
    So,another week has gone by,and I am checking in again like you taught me!
    I like the story line of Marshmallow Bare Bones,but I don't understand,is this an idea of your own for a story,or is it the outline of a story that you read?
    Have a good week.
    Love from
    Grandma Gill

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  2. Hi Yotam,
    Like always, it is fascinating to see your humour and imagination in the way you share the story with us.
    Keep up the good work,
    Your Aunty Ella

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  3. Hi Yotam,
    What is WALT?
    Love
    Grandma Gill

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.