- Boy at campfire cooking marshmallows
- Something creeps up behind him
- Boy's blanket catches fire from a spark
- Boy realizes there is a monster
- Boy throws blanket at monster
- Grass catch on fire
- Both jump into water
- Dad comes and puts the fire out
- Boy tells Dad about the monster
- Dad hits monster
- Monster is boy's big brother
- All have marshmallows together
Wednesday, 27 August 2014
Marshmallow Bare Bones
WALT: Create a bare bones plan
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Hi Yotam,
ReplyDeleteSo,another week has gone by,and I am checking in again like you taught me!
I like the story line of Marshmallow Bare Bones,but I don't understand,is this an idea of your own for a story,or is it the outline of a story that you read?
Have a good week.
Love from
Grandma Gill
Hi Yotam,
ReplyDeleteLike always, it is fascinating to see your humour and imagination in the way you share the story with us.
Keep up the good work,
Your Aunty Ella
Hi Yotam,
ReplyDeleteWhat is WALT?
Love
Grandma Gill